Feeback

In class today we swapped work with eachother and gave other people in the class feedback on their work. The feedback that I recieved for my front cover was as followed;

The first question on the feedback sheet was "who do you think the audience is for this magazine? How did you arrive at this idea?"
The answers I recieved for this were;
- mostly girls aged 14-18, use of pink and the "reveals all"
- 10-14, as it says pop all over it.

The second question was; "What genre is this music magazine? What is it about the cover which gives you this impression?"
- Pop/RnB, use of bright colours and text, and the title 'LOUD'
- Pop, as there is pop all over it

Other feedback I recieved from this task was;
- That my main image looks good as Daniel is standing out fronm the magazine, over the title.
- To use some different fonts and add more bright colours onto it.
- To use more colourful text as some are harder to read than others.
- Add a secondary image to the front cover.

From this feedback I made a few changes to the front cover of my music magazine such as I changed the font for the coverlines to

"Lithos Pro"

so that they stood out more and were more interesting and fun. I also changed the colour of some specific words on the magazine such as the Rihanna in the star shape and I changed the word Loud at the bottom of the page to the same colour as the title loud and made it bold so it stands out.